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biofreak659 ([personal profile] biofreak659) wrote in [community profile] chenqing_1002021-04-17 02:10 am

The smoke above reluctant to depart: Strange but not a Stranger

Title: Strange but not a Stranger
Author: biofreak659
Word Count: 100
Characters: Wen Ning, Wei Wuxian
Rating: G
Author's Notes: Unbetaed

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The smoke curling off the campfire turned the treeline hazy. The sun was still orange as it sank behind the horizon, but it was a rotten color.


Wen Ning watched the wisps fade into the air. In another lifetime, he would have been coughing and weeping—he'd been sickly at times, as a child—but death meant that he couldn't blink away the gritty smoke even if he wanted to.


Wei Wuxian cleared his throat and waved the air in front of his face. "Ah, Wen Ning?"


"Yes?"


Wei Wuxian stared into the fire. "Do you ever miss your sister?"


"Sometimes. Often."



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[personal profile] hhimring 2021-04-18 09:28 am (UTC)(link)
Wen Ning may not be able to weep anymore, but his feelings are as strong as ever!
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[personal profile] aroberuka 2021-04-22 10:40 am (UTC)(link)
Ouch, Wen Ning :(

Love the description of the campfire & sunset before snapping to a closer pov--it's a good way to set the scene, and it gives the drabble a very contemplative feel.